Stinky Feet

The author does created a really good paper it was both interesting and terrifying, he really did a good job utilizing all the rhetorical tools like emotion and logic. He did not seem to use a lot outside research perhaps including other opposing articles could establish a better credibility. The report especially utilized emotion putting in grotesque pictures and details explaining the true terror of the disease. All in all the report was really good it kept you interested wanting to learn more and more since as it explained athlete’s foot isn’t too foreign at all. Adding in more data and outside research even opposing research probably would make  this report a lot better.

The blog I chose to write about this week was Steve Cabrera’s athlete’s foot report paper we were tasked to critique. Athlete’s foot is all around us whether we want to admit it or not, we have it everywhere that is moist. Yep in our showers, in the local gym and even at our schools, you could even say it could be found in the high end offices and businesses. Athletes foot is a fungal infection, although it is unique for each victim the symptoms could be cracking of the skin, redness, swelling, extreme pain in the feet, underarms or groin regions. It starts off usually as a red mark or rash and could eventually move to an infection that any person would be terrified of.

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